It may not directly affect you

[suchona.kani.z]

Don't ask if you can ask. Instead, ask a specific question. It will be faster and clearer for the reader.

So why are you writing? Segment your database and only send emails that really matter to your readers.

And the last thing
First thing, next thing, last thing… An email like that probably won’t read very well. Instead, focus on making sure that the individual passages and the information they contain are coherent.

Here are some links
Listing links in emails can be a bit cumbersome. If you want to link, it's better to embed links directly into the text and use anchor texts or CTA buttons that the reader will have to click.

I am no expert
So why should the recipient read your newsletter? Either you have korea email list something to say and are an expert on the subject, or there is no point in sending the email at all. There is no in-between. By saying something like that, you will only reduce the value of the text. It is better to let the reader decide for themselves whether your emails are worth reading.

Does this make sense to you?
An email has to make sense. But asking your readers about it? It's better to ask yourself this question before sending it. If it doesn't make sense, rewrite it.

You didn't read the last email.
Ask yourself if it's really appropriate to chastise a reader from whom you expect further action. Most of us wouldn't even read any future email after such an introduction.